The rest of the poem makes no sense but I love this thought, Why do I love e.e. cummings so much?
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
e.e. cummings
Wednesday, June 27, 2007
Fat free Christian
Hey there Christian
I see you once a week
your Sunday school solution
Like a New Year's resolution
You're a one arm push-up
sometimes up, but mostly down
your're on some kind of treadmill
but you aren't gaining any ground
you're looking left,you're looking right
at others on their staitionary bike
push those pedals- win that race
spend and hour in one place
the race to win should point to heaven
but you're maxed out at level 7
Who is winning, you're all still abreast
and hour of exercise, a week of rest
Is anyone really trying their best?
Sounds pretty harsh
I do it too
I've got my spiritual gut - like you
I'm milk fed, log eyed - forget the meat
scripture reading's like a vegetable treat.
30 pounds in 30 days
I'm beefing up in spiritual ways
Is this zeal just another diet craze?
I see you once a week
your Sunday school solution
Like a New Year's resolution
You're a one arm push-up
sometimes up, but mostly down
your're on some kind of treadmill
but you aren't gaining any ground
you're looking left,you're looking right
at others on their staitionary bike
push those pedals- win that race
spend and hour in one place
the race to win should point to heaven
but you're maxed out at level 7
Who is winning, you're all still abreast
and hour of exercise, a week of rest
Is anyone really trying their best?
Sounds pretty harsh
I do it too
I've got my spiritual gut - like you
I'm milk fed, log eyed - forget the meat
scripture reading's like a vegetable treat.
30 pounds in 30 days
I'm beefing up in spiritual ways
Is this zeal just another diet craze?
Sunday Morning Sanctimony
Sunday Morning Sanctimony
I've got the gospel in my pocket
a couple verses in my head
my life verse above my window
and a spirit that is almost dead
I can quote some Greek and Hebrew
I'm unsure what it means
I could find it in a commentary
or stack of Christian magazines
I can spell hyper static union
I can quote all of Romans 8
I can sing in the congregation
with a heart that is full of hate.
What exactly is a Christian?
What does it mean to love?
How does the Gospel affect my station
' before the throne of God above'?
What's the good of going to church
if it's all for me and my friends?
Who's on my Christian wish list?
who even knows I'm a witness?
I want to serve you and your people
Lord,
I just don't know where to start
Create in me a right spirit
Create in my a clean heart.
I know, I know, I said I was relegating all of my poetry to my poetry blog but ... my husband made me do it.
I've got the gospel in my pocket
a couple verses in my head
my life verse above my window
and a spirit that is almost dead
I can quote some Greek and Hebrew
I'm unsure what it means
I could find it in a commentary
or stack of Christian magazines
I can spell hyper static union
I can quote all of Romans 8
I can sing in the congregation
with a heart that is full of hate.
What exactly is a Christian?
What does it mean to love?
How does the Gospel affect my station
' before the throne of God above'?
What's the good of going to church
if it's all for me and my friends?
Who's on my Christian wish list?
who even knows I'm a witness?
I want to serve you and your people
Lord,
I just don't know where to start
Create in me a right spirit
Create in my a clean heart.
I know, I know, I said I was relegating all of my poetry to my poetry blog but ... my husband made me do it.
Friday, June 22, 2007
Thursday, June 21, 2007
Story of my life
to my sometimes friend,
you don't even know who you are
how I wish I spent the time with you
to nurture what never was
I wonder why I'm lonely
rejected lovers know what it is like
but between us there has been no fight
I don't fit in your circle, you don't fit in my phone
I'll just play with my ipod and live life alone.
you don't even know who you are
how I wish I spent the time with you
to nurture what never was
I wonder why I'm lonely
rejected lovers know what it is like
but between us there has been no fight
I don't fit in your circle, you don't fit in my phone
I'll just play with my ipod and live life alone.
Chansons Innocentes: by e.e. cummings
in Just-
spring when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman
whistles far and wee
and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring
when the world is puddle-wonderful
the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing
from hop-scotch and jump-rope and
it's
spring
and
the
goat-footed
balloonMan whistles
far
and
wee
I know this is the first day of summer but I just love the way e.e. cummings writes. When I is was in highschool my name was Jacquiandbrooke and in elementary school I was Wendyandjacqui. I think I really miss the everydayness of a school friend.
spring when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman
whistles far and wee
and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring
when the world is puddle-wonderful
the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing
from hop-scotch and jump-rope and
it's
spring
and
the
goat-footed
balloonMan whistles
far
and
wee
I know this is the first day of summer but I just love the way e.e. cummings writes. When I is was in highschool my name was Jacquiandbrooke and in elementary school I was Wendyandjacqui. I think I really miss the everydayness of a school friend.
Tuesday, June 19, 2007
The Night has a Thousand Eyes
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet the light of the bright world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
And the heart but one:
Yet the light of a whole life dies
When love is done.
-- Francis William Bourdillon
So much to ponder here, I'm going to have to read more Bourdillon since I hadn't heard of him until I looked up the inscription I found handwritten in my very old copy of Paradise Lost.
And the day but one;
Yet the light of the bright world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
And the heart but one:
Yet the light of a whole life dies
When love is done.
-- Francis William Bourdillon
So much to ponder here, I'm going to have to read more Bourdillon since I hadn't heard of him until I looked up the inscription I found handwritten in my very old copy of Paradise Lost.
The poem that never was
think,think think
think,think think
"the train moved like a lightning crack ..."
I push my backspace back back back
think,think think
think,think think
"her hair was like a waterfall of grey..."
I brushed that little thought away
think,think think
think,think think
"a turbo engine and silver sage ..."
I sighed and quickly turn the page
Over thinking, loads of tripe -
I close the page. I'm done tonight.
Sometime no matter how hard I try to make an idea work, I come up against a brick wall, am I the only one?
think,think think
"the train moved like a lightning crack ..."
I push my backspace back back back
think,think think
think,think think
"her hair was like a waterfall of grey..."
I brushed that little thought away
think,think think
think,think think
"a turbo engine and silver sage ..."
I sighed and quickly turn the page
Over thinking, loads of tripe -
I close the page. I'm done tonight.
Sometime no matter how hard I try to make an idea work, I come up against a brick wall, am I the only one?
Monday, June 18, 2007
To my father
A shrinking shadow,
you were so tall
the sun was high
when you started to fall
Slowly sinking
didn't notice at first
- inflated puddle
first shortened, then burst
the bright light inside
the day that you died
cast nothing but spotlights
on the tears that i cried
two salty dribbles
race down my chin
one father died
a new one begins
you reached for my hand
you started to love
you called me at home
as the sun stretched above
climbing again
it reaches higher
casting a shadow that won't expire.
After my dad's heart attack, he has realized the importance of family and has reached out to us all in different ways. Thanks dad.
you were so tall
the sun was high
when you started to fall
Slowly sinking
didn't notice at first
- inflated puddle
first shortened, then burst
the bright light inside
the day that you died
cast nothing but spotlights
on the tears that i cried
two salty dribbles
race down my chin
one father died
a new one begins
you reached for my hand
you started to love
you called me at home
as the sun stretched above
climbing again
it reaches higher
casting a shadow that won't expire.
After my dad's heart attack, he has realized the importance of family and has reached out to us all in different ways. Thanks dad.
Mazal Tov Josh and Lisa!!
The rhyming couplet ... explained
I read all of Shakespeare's sonnets when I was in high school and since they all end in a r.c. I think that poetic form has been deeply embedded in my brain. For a more complete explanation look it up on Wikipedia. This will be a poetry website full of mundane poetry from my daily life and brilliant poetry from other authors. Here is a favorite by Milton
XIX On His Blindness 1655
When I consider how my light is spent
Ere half my days in this dark world and wide,
And that one talent which is death to hide
Lodg'd with me useless, though my soul more bent
To serve therewith my Maker, and present
My true account, lest he returning chide,
"Doth God exact day-labour, light denied?"
fondly ask. But Patience, to prevent
That murmur, soon replies: "God doth not need
Either man's work or his own gifts: who best
Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state
Is kingly; thousands at his bidding speed
And post o'er land and ocean without rest:
They also serve who only stand and wait."
XIX On His Blindness 1655
When I consider how my light is spent
Ere half my days in this dark world and wide,
And that one talent which is death to hide
Lodg'd with me useless, though my soul more bent
To serve therewith my Maker, and present
My true account, lest he returning chide,
"Doth God exact day-labour, light denied?"
fondly ask. But Patience, to prevent
That murmur, soon replies: "God doth not need
Either man's work or his own gifts: who best
Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state
Is kingly; thousands at his bidding speed
And post o'er land and ocean without rest:
They also serve who only stand and wait."
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